| Rule | Status | Feedback & Evidence |
|---|---|---|
| 1. Word Count (<75 words) | FAIL | 118 words total; risks being skipped on mobile devices. |
| 2. Consequence-Led | FAIL | Opened with 'My name is Marcus' rather than an operational pain. |
| 4. One Pain Focus | FAIL | Combined hygienist scheduling, claim denials, and chair turnover. |
| 5. Soft Interest CTA | FAIL | '15 minutes next Tuesday?' demands calendar time prematurely. |
| 8. Subject Line | FAIL | 'Transform Practice Operations!' is capitalized marketing copy. |
Paste any cold email and get it scored against 8 rules: length, consequence-led, pub test, one pain per email, CTA quality, first line, filler, and subject line. Each fail gets a line-level callout with specific suggestions to fix it. A quick diagnostic before you rewrite.

